storytelling craft

Plotting, Suspense

Cliffhangers

Readers don’t actually hate cliffhangers.
They hate being cheated.

What they’re reacting to isn’t tension or anticipation—it’s a broken promise. An ending that withholds resolution, slices a single story into artificial chunks, or stops mid-thought without delivering what the book itself set up isn’t a cliffhanger at all. It’s a contract breach.

A real cliffhanger resolves the story you promised to tell—and then opens the door to the next problem. It creates momentum, not confusion. When done right, the reader doesn’t feel tricked. They feel hooked.

Christmas scene with books 2
Miscellaneous

An Editor’s Christmas List (For His Writers)

What editors want for Christmas isn’t polish, perfection, or vibes—it’s finished books, clear storytelling, and writers who trust their readers enough to be specific and brave. An editor’s wish list for writers who want stronger stories, better partnerships, and a publishing year that actually gets books across the finish line.

Character, Scenes, Setting

Why Your Scene’s Setting Matters More Than You Think

Setting isn’t wallpaper. It’s the emotional engine under every scene you write. A confession uttered beneath stained-glass saints is a completely different moment than one whispered in the soft half-light of a bedroom — same words, wildly different meaning. If a scene feels limp, nine times out of ten the setting is the culprit. Make the room work just as hard as the characters, and suddenly the whole story sharpens.

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